Saturday, August 18, 2012

I want to be Free

Pic:  http://www.animalsw.com



A day will come when I’ll open my wings
A day when I’ll not listen to a single thing.

I have had enough, enough of sorrow
But I look forward for a better tomorrow.

All those things spoken between you and me
Sounds like a lie, like a ridicule to me

If you have thought I am a bird with broken wings
Then you will be sorry to see me break all strings.

I will fly away, one day, high above the blue sea
With wind beneath my wings, yes, I want to be free.


Leave a comment below if you liked the poem, it will inspire me to pen down some more! 



9 comments:

  1. wonderful.. and 'liberating'.
    loved it. :) i loved the theme. :) glad i stopped by. and i am also happy and glad to tell you that i too wrote 1-2 poems about 'flying'.
    ;)

    if you do find time,
    stop by here, you might fly higher :)

    Jump First If You Want To Fly
    The Scarlet Bond

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  2. "If you have thought I am a bird with broken wings
    Then you will be sorry to see me break all strings." Loved this line Tina. Nice.

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  3. thnks jayanth... surely will check out

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  4. loved it! loved the fourth stanza...
    www.shamsud-ahmed.com)

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  5. We all have desire to fly like bird,unfortunately we don't have wings


    http://legalgensis.blogspot.in/

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  6. Beautifully written poem. Your words are very inspiring and powerful. Liked this one a lot. Really nice work.

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