Hello guys, see I am being punctual for a change. My Thursday Five Sentence Fiction Prompt from Lillie's blog just arrived in my inbox and here I am updating my post already. I like the moment when my mind starts thinking how to play with the prompts as soon as I get them. I so like prompts.
People please let me know on some blogging challenges please, weekly or monthly challenges. You can also tell me about food blog challenges. In case you have not noticed I have a food blog as well which goes by the name Twinkling Tina Cooks. Challenges makes life interesting.
Okay now check out my this weeks Five Sentence Fiction and you ca read the previous posts here.
Over a cup of Coffee
Frieda spotted a familiar looking face at the coffee shop, a
face that she knew all her life, it was still the same, pretty and lively but
now had a reading glass on and was dug in a book.
“Hi” she said as the pretty face looked up and stared at her
through her reading glasses, it stood still for a moment but Frieda watched the
eyes light up.
“Hi, long time” said Candice while pulling up a chair for
her.
They chatted for several hours, the chat started out with single
words and long silences but ended in girly giggles and consoling hugs like the
old times.
The weekend stroll at the mall proved fruitful for Frieda,
that silly misunderstanding over the
college lad had kept the best friends apart for six years, but now they were
back like old times and Frieda was happy she made the first move in all these
years.
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Rajneesh ji.. Dhanyavad.
ReplyDeleteGood take on the prompt Tina :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Jyotsna
ReplyDeleteahh friendship did overcome all barriers :) beautiful write
ReplyDeleteThanks Rajlakshmi
ReplyDeleteEven I have written about misunderstanding in friendship ...Nice one Tina
ReplyDeleteThanks Nabanita
DeleteGood one Tina.
ReplyDeleteThank you Janaki
DeleteNice take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThank you Indira
DeleteI like the premise you've shown here, but I felt somewhat empty not knowing anything about the misunderstanding these two old friends concerning this guy.
ReplyDeleteHi Robin, I understand. Somehow here it was more about the friendship for me. May be next time I'll take care to put in lil more. Thanks for bringing in my notice
DeleteAlways great when friendship wins over misunderstanding :) Nice story, Tina.
ReplyDeleteThanks Anita, Yes it's always good to cherish true friendship than letting some misunderstandings creep in.
DeleteLove seeing the completely different views people take on these!
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