Five sentence Fiction time again, and I just realized that i haven't written anything after my last week's FSF!!!
But something happens when I get these prompts.. I simply get a rush to write it down as soon as possible! I wish I did that for other posts too...
Anyways go ahead and read this one. Read the other ones here.
The Stalker
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He couldn't leave her walking alone in this Downtown area which
was infamous for the street thugs, he still cared for her.
Susan seemed happy and lost in the world of addiction, she
was completely consumed by drugs and it was evident from her face.
Ethan’s heart ached
every time he saw Susan in this state – he still loved his lady love, his
sweetheart, his ex-wife, even two years after their bitter divorce.
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Blissful love of a man, has no reason but pure care always. Portrayed such a man so cute.
ReplyDeleteThank you
ReplyDeleteWell written. It's tough to see a loved one destroy their life
ReplyDeleteThanks Rajlakshmi... so true..
ReplyDeleteI loved reading how sincere your character was.This is what love is all about.
ReplyDeleteRanu Thanks for this appreciation. I strive to give a depth to the characters I write about. It feels nice if readers connect to them.
ReplyDeleteThat's not really a stalker so much as someone who is unable to let go. Perhaps one day she will come out of the darkness of addiction. Sadly, many do not.
ReplyDeleteRose I wish people do come out of addictions... Ethan here is a lover and he still cares
ReplyDeleteSuch despair for both of them. Well done!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Lilllie
ReplyDeleteYou can never forget true love ... very vividly expressed ... loved your choice of words !!!
ReplyDeleteAmrit thanks for your appreciation.
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