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The Inseparable Sisters
Leena & Mahi were inseparable, no one could tell they
were first cousins and not own siblings.
There wasn't a day when they didn't played together and they
visited each other when one was sick, after all that was the advantage of staying
next door.
That day when they were playing doll house in Leena’s room,
Mahi’s mom rushed and picked her up and left in a hurry before Leena could say
a good bye to her friend.
It’s four months now since that dreadful day and the two
sisters have not met or spoken a single word to each other.
Their lives and homes are fenced forever because of that silly argument between their fathers
and the only thing Leena and Mahi could do was to pray to be together again.
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That's a nice fiction Tina! Short and appropriate to convey your idea. :)
ReplyDeleteI wish they could be together again!
So do I Umang, there are times when we see such things around. Thanks for dropping by.
DeleteTina this is a wonderful story, though it's sad.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ranu.
DeleteNice story.
ReplyDeleteBut if you merely allude to what Dad said, how do we know it was silly?
Hi Adrian thanks for dropping by. I understand your query, but my idea was to state that even if the parents/elders fight/have arguments/have differences kids shouldn't get affected with that nor should there be any restriction on the kids to communicate
DeleteNice story.
ReplyDeleteBut if you merely allude to what Dad said, how do we know it was silly?
nice story Tina!
ReplyDeleteyou have presented the innocent friendship fenced due to elders argument beautifully ! :)
Thanks Crimson Curls, its sad when elders do not try to understand friendship or relationships
DeleteIt's sad when families fall out...definitely causes fences...
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by Thelastkrystallos
DeleteSo sad, makes you hope they can finally get back together at some point in time.
ReplyDeleteD.B. McNicol
Romance & Mystery...writing my life
Yes Donna, in my story they definitely will :)
DeletePeople fight for flimsiest reasons and it is others who have to bear the burnt. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteThanks Janaki
DeleteSo sad how this happens. You did such a great job to write from the perspective that you did.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your kind words Cammies on the floor.
Deleteoh that was such a petty reason for the girls to separate! We adults are often so not thoughtful when it comes to such situations.
ReplyDeleteInteresting read :)
Awww, how sad for them. We adults erect the most ridiculous fences, I tell you!
ReplyDeleteShailajav, you are so true, all problem starts when people turn adults, loss of innocence doesn't do much good
DeleteSad, but a fact......many innocent souls get separated from each other over such trivial issues....it can be heart breaking!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Shilpa
DeleteSad for the cousins..maybe they could re-unite the families later on?
ReplyDeleteYes they would if i write down the story :)
DeleteThis happens so often, doesn't it? And it is really sad that it does.
ReplyDeleteYes it does Shail and it shouldn't, not at a level that innocence gets affected
DeleteGood take on the prompt Tina. Sadly, it's all the more true in India, where families get into tiffs over silly reasons.
ReplyDeleteThanks A.
DeleteOh perfect Indian tale this one :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Soumya
DeleteNice story.
ReplyDeleteThanks संजय
DeleteThe elders of the family fought and the younger ones had to bear the brunt.Not fair.
ReplyDeleteYes Kalpana, in reality when things like these happen they are never fair. Thanks for dropping by
DeleteNice story. Simple but with so much meaning. And as you said it is a prequel to my story :-D
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