So here is what I, sort of, learn't today - Question Tags. Check out the new post on Write Tribe. Wiki says, a Question Tag is a grammatical structure where you turn a sentence in a question by adding an interrogative fragment.
Today's post is on the 100 Word Story on Saturday Prompt from Write Tribe and this post will have a lot of question tags!
Read my earlier short fiction posts here, won't you?
Let's have some Romance, shall we?
“This place is
awesome, isn’t it?”
“Yes babes.”
“The blue waters
outside… this serenity around us… it just feels like love is in the air”
“Come here babe? I don’t
want you so far”
“The villa’s so cozy,
the bed linens are so soft, it does feel
like home, doesn't it?”
“Absolutely, that is
exactly why I chose this tropical island for our honeymoon” said Nico while
placing a soft kiss on his newly wedded wife.
“Mr. Husband you are
getting romantic, aren't you?”
“What else could I do
when I have such a lovely bride”
“Love you my darling”
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This post is my entry to Write Tribe's 100 Word on Saturday Prompt.
Also linking this post as my Day 5 Post for Ultimate Blog Challenge July 2014.
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SOOOOO beautiful - both the words and the picture. Great job on the prompt
ReplyDeleteThanks Carol, I am glad you liked it.
DeleteThat is a neat concept. I am not sure I could even write Romance with 5,000 words!
ReplyDeleteThanks you, little fictions takes less time and that's what i like
DeleteThat was a lovely take on the prompt. Romantic and beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinodini
Deletedat was such a romantic take on the prompt ♥
ReplyDeleteThanks Swathi
DeleteI loved reading this article! It is so romantic and that picture says it all.
ReplyDeleteHugs,
Rally
Thanks Rally
DeleteAww!!! Such a sweet love story. For a while, I was expecting some sort of twist towards the end. But the simplicity and honesty of this one makes it all the more enchanting :) Nice one, Tine!
ReplyDeleteThanks A, Yeah i wanted to keep it simple and romantic :)
DeleteAh, I had a character called Niko.
ReplyDelete;-)
I really liked your short story!
Thanks Sophie
DeleteSimple and sweet :) Liked it.
ReplyDeletethanks. yeah sometimes simple things are sweet :)
DeleteRomantic take, Tina :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anita
Deletenow that's soooo romantic :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Rajlakshmi, I'm glad hat you liked it
DeleteBeautiful story and lovely picture to go with it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sulekha
DeleteLovely ! In fact we all prefer a nice homely feeling even when we are away from home. :)
ReplyDeleteso true
DeleteCute and simple. Liked it :)
ReplyDeletethanks
Deletewow Tina.... so romantic ... loved it...
ReplyDeleteThanks Huma
DeleteNice incorporation of the tags :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Shailaja
DeleteEvery word is so romantic and lyrical. The perfect home for a sexy and romantic escapade:)
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