What to do on a gloomy Sunday when you are down with cold and fever? Read books, stay warm and come up with a 55 Fiction! And that's exactly what I did today. Before the antibiotics make me go back to sleep, I better write my post.
So here goes my post.
Read my earlier 55 Fiction here.
Happy Anniversary
Cake… check, candles…check, lights… out.
Ridhima hoped Mohit will be happy with the anniversary
surprise…
He has been odd lately, but today she wanted him to be
happy.
She opened the door with a smile but Mohit gave a wicked grin.
Before she could say Happy Anniversary a shining dagger was plunged
into her heart.
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Linking this post as my Day 6 Post for Ultimate Blog Challenge July 2014.
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aww poor girl!! loved the twist :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Rajlakshmi
DeleteI wasn't expecting that knife. 55 fiction is a new concept for me :)
ReplyDeleteAnd it is an interesting concept Ana
DeleteOh my! That was shocking! Not the anniversary surprise she was hoping for. Good twist!
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absolutely not what any one would expect.
DeleteThat was a surprise!
ReplyDeleteyeah it was
DeleteNow comes the twist. I was hoping for the simple love story again :) But nicely penned.
ReplyDeletethanks Leo
DeleteHow sad! Poor girl. Nicely written :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Reema for dropping by
DeleteDidn't expect that -- (hope you are feeling better)
ReplyDeleteThanks Carol, I hope I'll be better by morning
DeleteOh what an anniversay gift :( Tragic.
ReplyDeleteMy UBC Day 6 Post
thanks Bhavya, yeah it is tragic
DeleteWhoa! Tragic end.
ReplyDeleteThanks Shail for dropping by
Deleteawww poor girl :-( nicely written tina!
ReplyDeleteThanks Swathi
DeleteThat was a morbid ending .... But nice narration and it had me hooked. :)
ReplyDelete55 Fictions is an interesting concept! Eagerly awaiting more mini-stories from you with more novel idea :-).
ReplyDeletePretty nice post. I just stumbled upon your blog and wished
ReplyDeleteto say that I've really enjoyed browsing your blog posts.
In any case I'll be subscribing to your feed and I hope you write again soon!
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I was browsing for some 55 fiction pieces and I came across your blog, loved the twist at the end.
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