Each time he saw Mischa, he was mesmerized
with her simplicity and beauty.
Everything felt nice whenever he
thought about her, he had spent days together day dreaming about her – holding her
close to him… very close to him, if Rob wanted anything in life , it was her.
“How long am I going to just love
her like this… she doesn’t even know about my feelings… Does she even know
anything about me?”
But he didn’t have the courage to
go and speak to her… not now… not so soon… he didn’t want her to see him
stuttering – something that he couldn’t help, but he decided he will not remain
silent.
That night he wrote pages after pages - he wanted to write
everything… the day he saw her first four years back, the times he had just
followed her only to see if she was safe, the days he have spent dreaming about
her… the nights that he have spent without blinking an eyelid thinking only and
only about her, but it seemed his heart was also stuttering that night.
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Also linking this to The Ultimate Blog Challenge July 2014 as my Day 12 post
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Beautifully written - and a very nice site, Tina :) (From the UBC)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written with emotion and feeling.I really want Mischa to find out about her secret admirer.
ReplyDeleteI had never heard of five sentence fiction. This is very cool!
ReplyDeletePoor lad. I was so hoping he would actually get the girl of his dreams. Will there be more? I really hoped he would finally tell the girl he loved her. Love a good love story.
ReplyDeletehttp://cattitudeandgratitude.blogspot.ca/2014/07/ubc-day-12-dark-clouds.html
All right --- you are going to have to let us know what happened1
ReplyDeleteThe girl was lucky to get someone who loved her unconditionally! I so wish there was than five sentences to this story. It would have made a good read to know what happened next!
ReplyDeletehttp://swathishenoy.blogspot.in/2014/07/phubbing.html
How I wish he expresses his feelings....good one :)
ReplyDeleteDoes Rob post the letter? If he doesn't out of nervousness, all the labour of love is lost. very sweet romance, Tina.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great beginning...now, please finish the story!
ReplyDeleteI had never heard of five sentence fiction, either. I sometimes tend to ramble. This would be a good discipline for me. Alana visiting from UBC.
ReplyDeleteNow, I just wish he gives the letter to HER! :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully crafted :)
I would love to read all those pages :)
ReplyDeleteA good build up :)
I like the heart stuttering part - that's a unique way to describe his feelings - and I do understand!
ReplyDeleteI so hope he gives her that letter!!
ReplyDelete"he had just followed her only to see if she was safe"
ReplyDeleteA very interesting thought he had. Look what the society has made us and the lovers! "Need" for protection for just being a girl.
A totally offbeat point it was.
Nice story.