Tuesday, July 15, 2014

Short Fiction - The Meeting

Like always he turned out to be a moron.

She absolutely despised him.

She wanted to escape this place, as soon as possible.


Rachel took a deep breath to calm down. She couldn't believe how lecherous he could be.

She read the lines, in front, repeatedly… she had written and read them many times over last few days…   

But she knew she had to do it now. She pressed the send button before she could change her mind.

The appraisal meeting with her boss didn't go well… she never expected it to be…
She was tired of his advances… Rachel knew he will twist everything to make her vulnerable.

Now with the resignation mail sent, she felt little better…more so because she had also remembered to mark the mail to the HR head, Director, Vice President and the CEO… Rachel made sure people knew why she was resigning.   



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Written for ABC Wednesday Round Fifteen for the letter A. My word for A is Appraisal. 
Also my Day 15 post for UBC July '14.
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24 comments:

  1. I want to know what happens next!

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  2. Sad and true. There are lot of similar people who have to quit but at times there voices are heard too! Hope they hears hers too. Good read Tina :)

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  3. I loved your extract. I'd really like to read more!

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  4. Whoa! Got us all hanging on! Waiting for the next chapter! Cool!

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  5. I agree...what happens now?

    Leslie
    abcw team

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  6. TOTALLY believable, unfortunately.
    ROG, ABCW

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  7. She took the right step.Brave girl!

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  8. I am glad she let others know too. Hope she will do well for herself.

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    1. yeah.. it's good to to send a mail that goes as a boom!!

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  9. :) I am waiting til they make me redundant due to shortage of work. Sigh, there is too much work. And I have told all of them the truth about who they are, in detail. And yet, no shortage of work. :)

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  10. Rachel is a wise girl!! I should do the same... but what now??
    Wil, ABCW Team.

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    1. just go ahead and do it... I'll take some inspiration from Rachel myself!!!

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  11. So smart of her to mark the others. She did the right thing! :)

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  12. fluidly written!!

    http://www.myunfinishedlife.com

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  13. Solid and full of potential...good luck with your writing♪ http://lauriekazmierczak.com/abstracts/

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  14. Short and crisp - a good read/1

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  15. Hi Tina,

    That indeed a bold step to say "NO" and Quit, rather trying to bear the non-sense of working with morons, for the sake of saving the job. Very shortly narrated, but conveys the message.

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