I took upon this mammoth task of reading all the blog posts that I found related to UBC July. If I am not wrong I read and commented on about 61 posts!!! Phew that's really a task. But now after so many nice posts my mind was wandering on what to write, and here I am writing yet another Short Story and this time for ABC & UBC both!.
For Y I am choosing Yellow. I love how the color brightens up every damn thing. So go ahead and read my short story.
You can read my earlier short fictions here.
Yellow Lilies
Before going off to sleep Diana
was sulking.
When she woke up in the morning she
was still in the same mood, as if the annoying feeling never left her.
She didn’t want to feel like that…
not today.
She looked at the bed side table
from where Brad gave his broad gummy smile.
She buried her face back in the
pillow… Diana didn’t want him to smile from the photo frame like every other day.
Today she wanted him here… by her side… under the blanket. Today she didn’t
want to be alone, not alone again on their anniversary. She was sure Brad
wouldn’t even remember the date, or would find time to call.
She tried going back to sleep
again on this bright sunny day when the doorbell rang.
Diana wasn't expecting anyone at
this hour of the morning, but still she went down to check.
And there he was standing with a
bunch of beautiful yellow lilies that
brought an instant glow on her face.
“Who sent these?”
“Mam, A very happy anniversary, here’s a little note that the sender has
sent”, said the delivery boy while handing over the card to Diana.
Before Diana could settle down on
her couch with the note, the phone rang loudly.
“How is it?” asked the thick voice across the line.
“Brad… you remembered?” she asked in a soft voice
“How can I not remember yellow
is your favorite color and that you absolutely love yellow lilies?”
“Ohh... Stop it Brad...they are lovely, but I am glad that you remember our anniversary. But
how did you manage this from Iraq?”
“A husband can do many things, my love, it doesn't matter if I’m in
Iraq or Afghanistan… Love you my Sunshine.”
“Love you too Sergeant Major” announced Diana while placing a tiny
kiss on the soft yellow petals.
Someone somewhere had said it justly,
being a soldier’s wife is not easy.
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Did you like it? Leave a comment below on your thoughts.
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Linking this post as my entry to the ABC Wednesday. Y is for Yellow.
Also linking this post as my Day 3 post for Ultimate Blog Challenge July 2014.
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The yellow lilies are lovely. Carver, ABCW-T
ReplyDeleteThanks Carver
DeleteStopping by from the UBC. I love yellow, it's such a peaceful color.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lisa
DeleteWell done! Thanks for sharing your beautiful writing. I too am a short fiction writer. I love the genre and you do it well :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words Sojourner Williams
Deletewhat a lovely short story and the yellow flowers are gorgeous,
ReplyDeletebest wishes,
Di.
Thank you Di
DeleteA lovely short story! Beautifully written :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Reema for dropping by
DeleteThe image is gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteI loved your short story/ extract. I'm not much good at writing short pieces myself, I write novels.
:)
Thanks Sophie, writing short pieces are my new found love
DeleteThat was a heartwarming story! Liked it :)
ReplyDeletethanks Shilpa
DeleteNever easy indeed. It's as much a battle at home as the husband in the field. But good that you had a happy ending :)
ReplyDeleteyeah I like happy endings :)
DeleteLove the story! I don't know how those soldiers's wives, or any person with their love one far away do it, is soo hard! And the picture is beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks, yes their lives are hard and difficult
DeleteThat was really a heart warming story with a happy ending.Nicely written
ReplyDeleteThanks KP
Deleteaptly said. Its toughest being a soldier's wife. Apart from constantly having to live away from each other, there s always the fear of war and losing them :(
ReplyDeletethanks Ghata for dropping by. yes it is quite tough
DeleteWhat a sweet story. Distance defeated.
ReplyDeleteROG, ABCW
Thanks Rog
Deleteawww this is even more beautiful. YOu spin such lovely stories :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Rajlakshmi
DeleteLovely story.
ReplyDeleteThanks Brendan
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