Friday, August 8, 2014

Five Sentence Fiction - Will it be a yes?

If you are in Bangalore you must be enjoying the beautiful weather. I simply love it. Just went out in the afternoon for lunch and experienced the cold shower. There's a certain charm in getting drenched in the rain. Sometimes I feel like rolling down the window to let some rain in. 

Now since the weather here is so romantic, I want to write a romance fiction, so here's a romantic flash fiction for Lillie's prompt.


Will it be a yes?


The otherwise confident and uber cool Ethan felt butterflies flying in his stomach today.

He was nervous... he had felt it from the heart this time, this was not a casual attraction.

He knew she is the one… she is the one with whom he wanted to grow old with.

Will she say a yes…. What if she rejects… for the very first time he had written this letter with all his heart…


He saw her entering the river deck at a distance… his heart skipped a beat… his eyes lit up when her luminous smile gave away her answer… yes… she will say yes… Ethan knew it inside.   

source: www.picturesocial.com
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This post is for Lillie McFerrin Writes Five Sentence Fiction for the prompt LUMINOUS.  

Also linking this to Write Tribe Pro Blogger Challenge as my Day 8 post
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10 comments:

  1. Sweet one :) Everybody deserves to hear a yes :)

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  2. Good that he saw positive vibes. Cute story.

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  3. the heart knows... nice story.

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  4. cute one :-) cheers to love!

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  5. I am glad it has an happy ending...BTW on the prompt link you have mentioned :
    This post is for Lillie McFerrin Writes Five Sentence Fiction for the prompt SECURE.

    You may want to correct that to "Luminous"

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  6. Aww.. that's so sweet :) Lovely story, Tina!!

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  7. A sweet story. Like the expression - Luminous smile :)

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