If you are in Bangalore you must be enjoying the beautiful weather. I simply love it. Just went out in the afternoon for lunch and experienced the cold shower. There's a certain charm in getting drenched in the rain. Sometimes I feel like rolling down the window to let some rain in.
Now since the weather here is so romantic, I want to write a romance fiction, so here's a romantic flash fiction for Lillie's prompt.
Will it be a yes?
The otherwise confident and uber cool Ethan felt butterflies flying in his stomach today.
He was nervous... he had felt it from the heart this time,
this was not a casual attraction.
He knew she is the one… she is the one with whom he wanted
to grow old with.
Will she say a yes…. What if she rejects… for the very first
time he had written this letter with all his heart…
He saw her entering the river deck at a distance… his heart
skipped a beat… his eyes lit up when her luminous
smile gave away her answer… yes… she will say yes… Ethan knew it inside.
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Sweet one :) Everybody deserves to hear a yes :)
ReplyDeleteGood that he saw positive vibes. Cute story.
ReplyDeleteVery cute! Loved reading it.
ReplyDeleteCute story Tina...
ReplyDeletethe heart knows... nice story.
ReplyDeletecute one :-) cheers to love!
ReplyDeleteI am glad it has an happy ending...BTW on the prompt link you have mentioned :
ReplyDeleteThis post is for Lillie McFerrin Writes Five Sentence Fiction for the prompt SECURE.
You may want to correct that to "Luminous"
Aww.. that's so sweet :) Lovely story, Tina!!
ReplyDeleteThe heart knows it always, doesn't it?
ReplyDeleteRandom Thoughts Naba - The Weekend Roundup...
A sweet story. Like the expression - Luminous smile :)
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