Saturday, July 19, 2014

100 Word Story - I'll not Spare you

Ohh you have finally come… I have been waiting… just for you.

Count your days Anderson Jr, I won’t let you stay here for long.

I have not let anyone.


You and your father didn't care about me, you never heard my cry, my plea…

It was a fun Sunday outing for you two… but what about me??

You made me a show piece on your wall… and then dumped me at this corner in the store room.

I have waited for twelve years… a soul trapped in this body...

I didn't spare your dad… now I won’t spare you.


photo prompt from Friday Fictioneer. Source Copyright – Adam Ickes

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This 100 words Fantasy Fiction is my entry for the Friday Fictioneer Post for Rochelle's Blog  on the photo prompt.
Linking this post as my Day 19 Post for Ultimate Blog Challenge July 2014
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14 comments:

  1. :( That little guy does not look happy and I do not blame him. Thanks for sharing.

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  2. LOL! Tina! So cool! Poor little ram ... it's a ram, right? I saw this photo on another post, with a different tale (tail ...) that I didn't quite get, but I now realize that this is part of another challenge! What fun you must be having.
    Thanks for the chuckle! HUGS <3

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  3. short n scary paranormal......

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  4. Very scary tale., but nicely woven.

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  5. Sounds very vengeful. Watch out!

    Lily

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  6. Oh! That's creepy!

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  7. Very creepy. Good work.

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  8. A great set-up for a much bigger revenge story - nicely done.

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  9. Tina, My first comment has disappeared. You might check your Spam filter as it does that sometimes. My comment was something like: Good story and well written A vengeful soul is a dangerous thing. I agree that this would be a great beginning for a longer story. Well done. : ) ---Susan

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  10. A well-written, creepy story. I'll admit I had to laugh that such a dark story was posted on a blog entitled, "The Sunny Side of Life." :-)

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  11. Creepy and spooky all at once. Guess the men had it coming :)

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  12. you put together a frightful and well told story, Tina. guess revenge was the ultimate choice for this character.

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