Friday, August 29, 2014

Five Sentence Fiction - What do I do?

Should I accept it…or should I just tell him to buzz off?

She felt in her heart Aakash had serious feelings for her… but why her… is a question that lingered in her mind.

What was it in her that attracted the son of such a famous industrialist?  

She loved him from the moment they had met in college but she wanted to stay away from him… will he be always true to me… she didn’t want to be his spring muse.


It was time… he’ll enter the cafĂ© anytime now…ohh these conflicting thoughts… what do I do? 

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This post is for Lillie McFerrin Writes Five Sentence Fiction for the prompt CONFLICT.  

Also linking this to Write Tribe Pro Blogger Challenge as my Day 29 post
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14 comments:

  1. I would love to know what happens after that. I could see story evolving here :) Wonderful write.

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    1. Thanks Rajlakshmi... will build up on it some time

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  2. An apt picture and yes, the 'why me' conflicts.. Well written Tina.

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  3. The anxiety to know what was her decision is too strong. You have built the story very beautifully and left the readers guessing.

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    1. Thanks Ushaji.... the answer might come in some other post!

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  4. nice portrayal of conflict in the post

    Dilemma

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  5. For her sake, I hope she makes the right decision.

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  6. She should wait for some more time and study him...

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  7. I hope she takes the right decision.

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  8. What did she do? You must tell us :)

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