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Sunday, September 7, 2014

100 Word Story - The warmth of love

In mood for some romantic fiction today. 

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The weekend trek was turning out to be a nightmare for Sean. They had lost track and it was getting darker by the minute.

Mia still dizzy from her earlier slip in the river was shivering… Sean without any thought had jumped in the cold water to save her.

He managed to put up a fire… it will keep them warm. Sean looked at Mia… her face glowing in the soft light… she looked even prettier… how he wished she knew how much he loved her.   

“Come sit close to me”

He got closer…


“Thanks”, she said with a kiss.

PHOTO PROMPT -Copyright – Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
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This 100 words Fantasy Fiction is my entry for the Friday Fictioneer Post for Rochelle's Blog  on the photo prompt.
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25 comments:

  1. UnknownSeptember 7, 2014 at 8:24 AM

    Warm fire, sandy beach, attractive couple. Great romance stuff! :)

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    1. Tina BasuSeptember 7, 2014 at 9:58 PM

      aww.. Thanks Shandra... you so got the romance i was trying to express here

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  2. Dr Roshan RadhakrishnanSeptember 7, 2014 at 8:37 AM

    Aww... lovely one :)

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  3. Vidya SurySeptember 7, 2014 at 10:14 AM

    How romantic! :)

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  4. NabanitaSeptember 7, 2014 at 10:47 AM

    As warm as the fire I suppose...:)

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 7, 2014 at 12:37 PM

    Good one Tina :)

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  6. SunSeptember 7, 2014 at 4:34 PM

    aww, that is quite romantic. i think a flame has ignited...great story!!

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 7, 2014 at 5:55 PM

    methinks there's more to come...
    Randy

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    1. Tina BasuSeptember 7, 2014 at 10:02 PM

      Thanks Randy... I might continue with this story line

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  8. AditiSeptember 8, 2014 at 1:33 AM

    Quite a romantic setting! That was lovely! :)

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  9. Rochelle Wisoff-FieldsSeptember 8, 2014 at 3:26 AM

    Dear Tina,

    Ah. A budding romance. Sweet.

    shalom,

    Rochelle

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  10. UnknownSeptember 8, 2014 at 5:46 AM

    Fiery kisses and romantic nights. :)

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  11. AnonymousSeptember 8, 2014 at 1:02 PM

    Dear Tina, Such a romantic story - I love it and well done! I think maybe his saving her has helped his status to go up in the world! Excellent! Nan :)

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  12. AnonymousSeptember 8, 2014 at 1:05 PM

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  13. AnonymousSeptember 8, 2014 at 1:07 PM

    Dear Tina, I am sorry, I wrote Ankush instead of you. I am so very sorry! Good writing!
    Nan :)

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  14. P.S. JoshiSeptember 9, 2014 at 4:57 AM

    Tina, This definitely looks like the beginning of a romance. He has become her hero. Well written, :) ---Susan

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